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Friday, July 11, 2008

And so, then, do I

A dove flies over
in summer's hot azure sky.
It coos a high coo.

3 comments:

  1. This is really great. I do question your punctuation (I have to be picky?)--How about, "Its coo's a high coo." Or, "It coos a high coo."

    Why did you write "It coo's a high coo."?

    In High Coo every syllable and comma matters....right? This is not Academia, but that's how I roll....%X#$$XX@@!

    You are so creative! Thank you for writing for all of us.

    Kathleen

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  2. Hmmm...it looks fine to me. Perhaps your monitor had a speck on it? (bwahahahaha)

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  3. And, by the way, Dr. K2, thank you for referencing my current favorite cartoon. I wonder if I could post it here? Hmmmmm.....

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